16 Aralık 2010 Perşembe

The Effects of Unemployment
Bergama is a province of Izmir. It is famous for its ancient history. Although its environment is fresh and clean, it can’t develop so much. One of the reasons why Bergama can’t develop is unemployment.
Bergama is a small place .Its main problem is unemployment. Many of the people who live in Bergama is unemployment .They have a family and they have to continue their life , but there isn’t wide land to work. Therefore ; they have to immigrate in another country or city. When they immigrate in another place , they have some problems . For example , they enter a new environment and they have a different culture from the people in the place that they go to work. As they have a different culture , people immigrating have some mentally problems. They can’t get on with the each other. People immigrating start to be stress and mentally disorder .It also pushes people in committing suicide. The family of people who are dead have both economic and mental problems. The type of Turkish family collapses and becomes a deep gap between people. However ; the unemployment affects the level of Bergama’s economic level. Due to the fact that the factories which support in Bergama’s economy aren’t built ,the economic level of Bergama can’t rise . For instance; actually Bergama has a lot of lands and raw produce to product , but there isn’t any factory that turn the produces into product. However; it affects even the economy of Turkey.
Although Bergama has a good location and environment , it can’t develop because of unemployment . Therefore, people who are there have to immigrate and it causes the recession . Also it affects Turkey’s economy.

2 yorum:

  1. Hi Sema;
    Your essay is good. I like your essay. But I think; we use the verb of immigrate with ''to'' (not with in). But I’m not sure. May be you write correct. May be I ‘m wrong:) thank you for writing:) see you:)

    YanıtlaSil
  2. hi ! i like your essay.. your organisation is good .. but i think this sentence"it can’t develop because of unemployment ." should be passive form.. anyway thanks for writing :)

    YanıtlaSil