MY ICON
"My sister is like my real mother.Whenever I have problem she helps eagerly me like a rescuer .My sweetest listens to my problems and tries to behave me patiently even I make a big unturnable mistake .She is my second mother; further more, I feel her more near me than my mum .
My sister is both a good and beautiful person.She has nice brown smooth hair that fly on the wind weather.Her eyebrown is like arc.She is of medium weight and medium height. She always wears according to the fashion.She doesnt like wearing unfashion clothes which arent convenient fashion.As she wears so, I am very careful to wear like her .Many times she takes clothes without me or other things for me .Dresses which my dear purchases to me ,I can wear as she knows which size is convenient for me and how type clothes I like. She has a natural unegualled beauty.I think she is one of the most beautiful women I have ever seen.She isnt aggresssive ; in contrast, she always bear even most disturbing thing .My sister becomes child with child and becomes adult with adult..She has ability to persuade somebody with a easy way since she can talk fluently and sensible.She has an important and unchangeable place among her friends.Her friends always take her idea about their problems.
My sister is not only a beautiful woman but also a good and thoughtful woman.I consult her whenever ı have problem .She is my icon
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hi dostum! there are less gramatical mistakes but more descriptive structures in your essay i like it :) but i think you should write your sentences with more detaails...
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